


Email audit
Stumped with storytelling but not quite ready to have someone do the writing for you?
Sometimes you’re SO close to what you write (literally near the screen and also personally, since it’s your story and all)...
That it’s hard to pinpoint exactly how to make things flow from one point into another.
This email audit gives you a much-needed extra set of eyes on your work.
I’ll go through with my “red pen” and mark up your emails…
But also explain the reasoning behind WHY.
Because how can you be a better writer if I just cross things out and leave you hangin’??
I’ll also share suggestions and ideas on how I would improve them so you can make changes AND apply those approaches to your next emails as well.
So if you struggle with identifying the deeper point of your story…
Or writing in a way that flows from one idea to the next…
Or leading the story into your CTA so it feels seamless and connected…
You’ll find this audit extremely helpful!
After purchasing, you’ll have 2 months to submit your work.
-You may send up to 3 separate emails to be reviewed.
-Emails eligible for review are weekly nurture or marketing emails.
-Welcome sequences, sales sequences, post-purchase sequences, really, anything sequenced, will not be reviewed.
Within two weeks of submission, you’ll receive:
-A Google doc with edits and comments
-A video recording to more deeply explain the reasoning behind the suggestions
Why is this limited to only nurture emails?
Because these can be standalone messages from one week to the next.
They’re focused on building trust and authority through storytelling and sharing various resources…
But don’t necessarily rely on being strongly anchored to other pieces of your marketing to make them successful.
With sequences, on the other hand, there are too many things to factor in that determine how the emails perform.
They need to align with the freebie/ads/post/page/etc. that led people into that sequence, after all.
After your purchase, I’ll send you an email to set up the audit!
Easy peasy, lemon squeezy 😉
Stumped with storytelling but not quite ready to have someone do the writing for you?
Sometimes you’re SO close to what you write (literally near the screen and also personally, since it’s your story and all)...
That it’s hard to pinpoint exactly how to make things flow from one point into another.
This email audit gives you a much-needed extra set of eyes on your work.
I’ll go through with my “red pen” and mark up your emails…
But also explain the reasoning behind WHY.
Because how can you be a better writer if I just cross things out and leave you hangin’??
I’ll also share suggestions and ideas on how I would improve them so you can make changes AND apply those approaches to your next emails as well.
So if you struggle with identifying the deeper point of your story…
Or writing in a way that flows from one idea to the next…
Or leading the story into your CTA so it feels seamless and connected…
You’ll find this audit extremely helpful!
After purchasing, you’ll have 2 months to submit your work.
-You may send up to 3 separate emails to be reviewed.
-Emails eligible for review are weekly nurture or marketing emails.
-Welcome sequences, sales sequences, post-purchase sequences, really, anything sequenced, will not be reviewed.
Within two weeks of submission, you’ll receive:
-A Google doc with edits and comments
-A video recording to more deeply explain the reasoning behind the suggestions
Why is this limited to only nurture emails?
Because these can be standalone messages from one week to the next.
They’re focused on building trust and authority through storytelling and sharing various resources…
But don’t necessarily rely on being strongly anchored to other pieces of your marketing to make them successful.
With sequences, on the other hand, there are too many things to factor in that determine how the emails perform.
They need to align with the freebie/ads/post/page/etc. that led people into that sequence, after all.
After your purchase, I’ll send you an email to set up the audit!
Easy peasy, lemon squeezy 😉
Stumped with storytelling but not quite ready to have someone do the writing for you?
Sometimes you’re SO close to what you write (literally near the screen and also personally, since it’s your story and all)...
That it’s hard to pinpoint exactly how to make things flow from one point into another.
This email audit gives you a much-needed extra set of eyes on your work.
I’ll go through with my “red pen” and mark up your emails…
But also explain the reasoning behind WHY.
Because how can you be a better writer if I just cross things out and leave you hangin’??
I’ll also share suggestions and ideas on how I would improve them so you can make changes AND apply those approaches to your next emails as well.
So if you struggle with identifying the deeper point of your story…
Or writing in a way that flows from one idea to the next…
Or leading the story into your CTA so it feels seamless and connected…
You’ll find this audit extremely helpful!
After purchasing, you’ll have 2 months to submit your work.
-You may send up to 3 separate emails to be reviewed.
-Emails eligible for review are weekly nurture or marketing emails.
-Welcome sequences, sales sequences, post-purchase sequences, really, anything sequenced, will not be reviewed.
Within two weeks of submission, you’ll receive:
-A Google doc with edits and comments
-A video recording to more deeply explain the reasoning behind the suggestions
Why is this limited to only nurture emails?
Because these can be standalone messages from one week to the next.
They’re focused on building trust and authority through storytelling and sharing various resources…
But don’t necessarily rely on being strongly anchored to other pieces of your marketing to make them successful.
With sequences, on the other hand, there are too many things to factor in that determine how the emails perform.
They need to align with the freebie/ads/post/page/etc. that led people into that sequence, after all.
After your purchase, I’ll send you an email to set up the audit!
Easy peasy, lemon squeezy 😉